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I saw that the Stage 32 + Netflix Present: Television Pitch Workshop is now on https://www.stage32.com/webinars/on-demand/2661874369453629862/1188


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Next Tuesday! The First 30 Pages, an online master #screenwriting class with author & award winning screenwriter Max Adams. 

There are 4 open seats in The First 30 Pages.

A writing sample is required if you are new to AFW classes & workshops. Please plan accordingly (aka give us enough time to read a writing sample before class opens). Hope to see you there.

REGISTER NOW!


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Posted by: @seemaxrun

Next Tuesday! The First 30 Pages, an online master #screenwriting class with author & award winning screenwriter Max Adams. 

There are 4 open seats in The First 30 Pages.

A writing sample is required if you are new to AFW classes & workshops. Please plan accordingly (aka give us enough time to read a writing sample before class opens). Hope to see you there.

REGISTER NOW!

See (or read) you there. After I signed up, I realized that on 4/14 I won't be able to make the chat. It's my wife's birthday and I'd like to stay married. 


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Bunny Mit Alarm Clock
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And as far as my reworked log line here it is

" Shadow and Light is a drama about a responsible young man grappling with the consequences of being unjustly registered as a sex offender."

Essentially, the same thing I just added some words (although I don't know if they are too big, lol).


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@chad It is on the right track. I think ex-con is more defining than "responsible young man." I also think being targeted by the police chief is an important factor. Did you save the loglines we did in lab? 

Shadow and Light is a drama about a young ex-con unjustly placed on a registered sex offenders list targeted by the police chief and a crusading journalist.

Stay away from "grappling." It's one of those sort of "mentally struggling" internal verbs that don't have much meaning in a logline because those are inactive.


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Bunny Mit Alarm Clock
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Posted by: @seemaxrun

@chad It is on the right track. I think ex-con is more defining than "responsible young man." I also think being targeted by the police chief is an important factor. Did you save the loglines we did in lab? 

Shadow and Light is a drama about a young ex-con unjustly placed on a registered sex offenders list targeted by the police chief and a crusading journalist.

Stay away from "grappling." It's one of those sort of "mentally struggling" internal verbs that don't have much meaning in a logline because those are inactive.

I did and thanks as always!


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Bunny Mit Three Legged Dog
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This is a great podcast episode about contests, fellowships, residencies and labs (the whole podcast is great for screenwriters): https://www.screenwritinglife.com/episodes/episode/27d19d6f/83-or-contests-fellowships-labs-and-residences-everything-you-need-to-know-ft-lisanne-sartor


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@maegan Nice, thanks for sharing that.


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May 17! Mastering Story Momentum, an online master #screenwriting class with author & award winning screenwriter Max Adams. 

There are 3 seats left in Mastering Story Momentum.

A writing sample is required if you are new to AFW classes & workshops. Please plan accordingly (aka give us enough time to read a writing sample before class opens). Hope to see you there.


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COMING TUESDAY!

Mastering Story Momentum, an online master #screenwriting class with author & award winning screenwriter Max Adams. 

There are 3 seats left in Mastering Story Momentum.

A writing sample is required if you are new to AFW classes & workshops. Please plan accordingly (aka give us enough time to read a writing sample before class opens). Hope to see you there.

 


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It is last call for the online #screenwriting class Mastering Story Momentum. This is the last structure class I will be teaching this year. Class rolls open at midnight. I have room for one more student. #writing #writingcommunity #afwnews #scriptnews http://theafw.com/momentum/


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5150 Alumni, don't forget Thursday is alumni chat night. Yay! See you there!


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Thanks for coming to everyone who attended AFW's Sweet Sixteen alumni party last night. It was very fun catching up. Also if you are not registered with forum (which is a separate animal from the chat forum) and want to be, hit me up with email and I will get you registered up. Would be cool to see you here too.

Happy Birthday AFW!

 


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The online screenwriting master class Character Writing taught by yours truly starts July 12. I still have seats available. Hit that!

CHARACTER WRITING


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Last call for registrations for the online screenwriting master class Character Writing. Class email goes out Friday. Class begins Tuesday.


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